Saturday, July 20, 2013

#0006 - Story Pictures - Succubus Bad Ending

Sorry for the long delay, many personal things came up (health, steam sales, etc.) Enjoy this latest story picture, which FenChat goer n666 commissioned me to write! He told me he absolutely loved it, and I hope you will too.

This one has all the goodies: corruption, demons, nipple-mouths, tentacle hair, futanari, tongue-cunts, lactation, nipple penetration, and my favorite fetish exotic cocks!

I learned a lot from reading Elements of Style and put them to good use in this latest installment. For instance, I moved the more important actions of the sentence to the predicate to improve clarity. I also, for those of you who like skimming, made some subtle changes to the first and last sentences to some paragraphs. See if you can spot the differences between this and my older works!

I also took the liberty of fiddling around with formatting. Right now, I am doing half-indents for every dialogue instance, and justifying each body paragraph. I think it makes it look uniform. In real publications, you have to make words fit by hyphenating them, but that would take additional hours I sadly lack. It is a pain enough using MS Paint to manually insert each screenshot into the picture, trust me. If any of you know of a simpler method, contact me!

Here is what I do to create a story picture:

1) Turn to full-screen viewing mode in MS Word.

2) Take a screenshot. Trim it, save it as a file.

3) Open the story image I am adding onto into MS Paint, calculate how many extra pixels I need to extend the background. (Right now, it’s 810x1000).

4) On the extended background, paint bucket it black so inserting the text is easier.

5) Insert the text, save file as finished picture.


On another note, I highly recommend playing XCOM. It is a great game, and was what I have been hoping for since it came up on the steam sale. If you liked playing Final Fantasy Tactics, you will most likely enjoy this game as well. My only complaint is that the late-game maps are too large and require you to go at a snail’s pace to avoid dying from AoO. The “Terror missions” are also unfair sometimes, and I hate doing them. Other than that, 9/10 in my book!

Succubus takes a new slave.

Succubus takes a new slave.

Succubus takes a new slave.




Monday, July 8, 2013

Ooofph...

Good news,

I found the most amazing book ever, Elements of Style, something any writer worth their salt should read.

Bad news,

I see now just how many mistakes and flaws there are in my own writing. I have a long road ahead of me before my writing will rise above competent and into the "good" range. It may never reach that potential, but we shall see!

That being said, next two stories might be delayed.

I simply must finish reading this book!

Saturday, July 6, 2013

#0005 - Story Pictures - CDC Researcher's Log

This one feature's gender transformation, enjoy! Compliments go to Malk for image cleaning!

Girl Turning into a futa.

Girl Turning into a futa.

Girl Turning into a futa.

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